IMPORTANT NOTE: Iv'e decided to cut out the point where you return to Birch's lab with May to get the pokedex and pokeballs for the sake of pacing and the fact that the scene was entirely unneeded. Our hero will still be going to route 103, though. Iv'e also lucked out by not coming by any encounters on both 101 and 103 prior to getting the pokeballs.
I'm a bit late again, sorry. Iv'e changed a few things around this time. Iv'e doubled the line width, halved the panel line size, and shrunk the gutter space. Hopefully this will make for better reading. Iv'e also started adding in the dialogue to the rough sketch I do prior to drawing the actual comic. I have to say that it really helps in fully fleshing out how a scene will look and how I can change things around to give maximum impact before I start committing to tighter drawings.
Also: Bonus points for anybody who can tell what game Snow is playing.Link to the nuzlocke forum version if you prefer that